Alone- Toshiro Masuda cover

a cover of toshiro masuda's Alone. one of my favorite songs. i've been playing guitar for 8 months now so i'm not that good at it yet. i found the tabs here: http://www.911tabs.com/link/?7153842 yesterday and decided to play it. i messed up a couple of times, but my fingers hurt so much from trying to get it right that i just chose the best version. me experimenting with a technique i saw from this video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E20s6djraqE comments, criticism, congrats? all is welcome